The long plane trip ther felt like a eternity me and my brothers were. Exhausted but my mum and grandad weren't they were sneaking out to Go to the shops. Within a blink of an eye the next day came along then we went to… Disney world!!! The next day I zoomed out of the hotel. I was ecstatic as I walked in I saw the breathtaking castle my jaw dropped. The first ride I went on was the… Tower of terror! I was terrified to death I got to the top I was frozen with fear I was just waiting for the drop… Ahhhh!!! It dropped I felt like I was going to die the next ride was cars it was awesome I loved it.
I really like how you had interesting things like verbs and other things I think you can work on doing more interesting words like ex:scamper, manageable,scurry
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