Thursday 30 May 2019

LEAVE

Basketball

basketball
Oh nooo I don't want a headache not again
“Let's play basketball i'll win”
“sure you will” looks like torture again help.


All I hear is “pass, pass, pass and shot, shot, shot” I taste dirt (does not taste nice)every second and I do not like it also my face smashing into the ground. 


Now you know what it’s like to be a basketball and the torture of it as well so think about it next time you play basketball

I hope you enjoyed my writing and thank you for listening so don't play basketball!!! Please help me I beg you.

I like how you described what the basketball felt, I think you can improve on using more punctuation.   
by Matthew

Wednesday 22 May 2019

number pieces

Tuatua

Why we should play fortnite all day


I think that we should play fortnite every day here are my reasons hope you enjoy and have fun.


My first reason is you can play with friends and make new friends and meet up in real life and you could talk to old friends.


My second reason is you can build maps and parkour and make mini games like hide and seek. and you Can explorer the map and look at anything new and secrets around the map.

And now my final reason is the game modes with different styles some are nomel 100 people in the battle bus and there is high elimination  game modes. And some only have snipers(long range gun) and shotguns only(close quarters.)

Thank you for listening to my three reasons and I hope you enjoyed my presentation.

I like your vocabulary and next time remember to put a full stop at the end by Aurel.

Thursday 16 May 2019

Why we should play games
By karlos
I think we should be allowed to play games every day all the time I am trying to persuade my parents here are my reasons.

They inspire creativity and inspire people to be game defenipers and you can play on the go anywhere.

Another reason is people think that games cause violence and bad language but this is not true it’s the parents are to fault because they exposed to it.

My final reason is some players are toxic (mean) and say bad things you could mute them or if it’s a children’s game ban them for 24 hours or 72 hours.

Thank you for listening to me but you must agree.

You need to work on your spelling I like your vocabulary by brent

Wednesday 15 May 2019

Operation flax

Jump jam

This morning it was different because everyone was doing jump jam with the jump jam guy it was hilarious my favourite was the coconut song.

But there was a twist the teachers had to go up as well and do the actions as well with jump jam. Guy(Brett) it was amusing.

Then we did a despicable me song it was… Chaos!!! Then he answered questions then the bell went of kids got his autograph.
I like your punctuation

Friday 10 May 2019

Assembly
This week (on Friday) will be room 7's  whole school assembly. I’m feeling confident because I know my lines and then we do schoolits is a poem
And I’m a little nervous about the national anthem because but there is a twist we are doing it in sign language because it’s sign language week my Castles slide topic is dungeons
I wonder who will get the principal's award this week I’m still nervous about my line

You have good punctuation but you need to work on spelling by brent

Friday 3 May 2019

Karlos                 my opinion
I think that we should not be allowed to ride a scooter in school

You could hit a kid and you could get harmed and trip and the other kid
Harmed

I think that we should not be allowed to ride a scooter in school


You could hit a kid and you could get harmed and trip and the other kid

Harmed You could trip on a crack in the pavement and have a injury then put a plaster on it. The final reason is the high speed in a narrow path

Good job but i
Think you should
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