Thursday 20 June 2019

Lazer tag

Lazer tag


I was excited at first I was on the green team I was virsing my dad, brothers and my mum. On my team ( the green team) it was my friend (Kayden) at the start we were watching the demonstrator, it was pitch black.


We were finally let in ,it felt like an eternity(ten minutes). After we got our guns... “let the fight begin” the speaker announced. I spotted someone in the distance. “Watch out someone is coming so stay alert ok?”

“ok thank you” Kayden whispered.It was like we were in a war zone. I heard some footsteps, they were getting louder and I was getting more frantick. Suddenly… ‘Pew pew’, shots were fired, he hit me but I hit him, he was like a minigun. My teammate was sneaking behind him and finished him off.


Then I went for cover, in a millisecond my friend yelled “ run!!!”

“What” I yelled.
“ run or get shot” Kayden exclaimed.
then I ran like the wind.

My team got the victory royale and that is my day out hope you enjoyed.


I Mr Mc thoroughly enjoyed your writing especially the way you add interesting vocabulary in your sentences. How about focusing on your new goal of spelling patterns? I think you’ll do well at this if you work on it.

Good man Karlos.
Mr Mc.



Wednesday 12 June 2019

56 divided by 4 =?

do not text and drive

I think that we are not allowed to text and drive  

I think that drivers should not be able to hold a cell phone wail driving and here are my three reasons hope you enjoy my reasons

Firstly you should not ; email text call and talk because you will crash and harm you and the people around you and you mite get paralysed

Secondly it can be hard to do fast reflexes and run into a to be continued

I Azra like your simey colon you need to work on your full stops.