Lazer tag

Lazer tag

I was excited at first I was on the green team I was virsing my dad, brothers and my mum. On my team ( the green team) it was my friend (Kayden) at the start we were watching the demonstrator, it was pitch black.

We were finally let in ,it felt like an eternity(ten minutes). After we got our guns... “let the fight begin” the speaker announced. I spotted someone in the distance. “Watch out someone is coming so stay alert ok?”

“ok thank you” Kayden whispered.It was like we were in a war zone. I heard some footsteps, they were getting louder and I was getting more frantick. Suddenly… ‘Pew pew’, shots were fired, he hit me but I hit him, he was like a minigun. My teammate was sneaking behind him and finished him off.

Then I went for cover, in a millisecond my friend yelled “ run!!!”

“What” I yelled.

“ run or get shot” Kayden exclaimed.

then I ran like the wind.

My team got the victory royale and that is my day out hope you enjoyed.

I Mr Mc thoroughly enjoyed your writing especially the way you add interesting vocabulary in your sentences. How about focusing on your new goal of spelling patterns? I think you’ll do well at this if you work on it.

Good man Karlos.

Mr Mc.