Friday 25 October 2019

my thoughts

These are my thoughts about Mr. Mc’s use of different maths apps during lesson time.
  • I like Number Rack because it was good for things up to one hundred.
The thing I don’t like is that it has no codes (codes give us the thing instantly).
  • I like The next app number pieces the reasons are that this one has codes I really got to be an expert on this app and I like you can use ones, tens and hundreds but these are the downside but I recommend it for next year.
The bad things are without the code it’s time-consuming and It’s hard to write with the pen on the app.
  • The next app is a math clock it's good for time-related questions and teaches time.
The problems are that it’s confusing at first. Buddy Comment - I like the way how you elaborated, good work. 

      

Tuesday 15 October 2019

My Holiday Writing

My holiday was the best yet and here's why it was so amazing.
First, I moved down the road.. we picked the worst night to move, it was like a hurricane outside, it was a mix between a hurricane and a tornado. 
After we moved, there was no internet forever!!!( five days but it felt like an eternity) for my family and I, on the first day the tv wasn’t working! it was a disaster.
Next, I went with my friend to a new arcade called Arche Brothers first we went to the Bumper Cars and then the Basketball game, I won against my friend (Kayden)next was the claw machine we won nothing. (it was rigged).  

And that my friend was my splendid holiday.

Buddy comment by Zara - I love the way how you used the word 'splendid' in your writing, keep up the good work. 

Thursday 26 September 2019

Sentence starters


She slightly opened the curtains… She anxiously took a look outside “ahhhh” Amelie screamed Amelie peeked outside. The crane was swinging the house violently swish swish swish! The windows were shattering slowly pieces started to crumble off the building...  

Wednesday 18 September 2019

gymnastics recount

Did you ever do gymnastics as a kid well I've been doing this for weeks because of kiwi sport. And here is what I learned so far it was fun here's are some reasons.
The things I liked were the safety roll but sometimes it hurts but I think it will come in handy in the future. The next thing I liked was the parkour course it was a fun experience for me.

The gymnastics I didn’t enjoy were the partner exercises it was the most challenging exercises there was the second one is
The balancing pole again I got hurt a little bit but it's a good skill to balance.
And that is what we did for gymnastics 

Thursday 29 August 2019

Multilink 3 by Karlos and Brent

tips for cross country

  1. Have a healthy diet
  2. Stay hydrated
  3. Train at least 5  times a week (if possible) 
  4.   Take deep breaths before cross country
  5. Don’t talk to friends
  6. Get ready to time yourself (if you have a watch)
During cross country
  1. Don’t talk to friends
  2. Don’t care about mud  
  3. Keep a good pace 
  4. Don’t look behind you it will slow you down 
  5. Don’t run up hills
  6. Sprint at the end  
  7. After cross country 

    1. Stay hydrated 
    2. Cool down after 
    3. Have a sit down (and have a good sleep)
    4. Go toilet after
    5.  Get changed 
    6. Make sure to stretch     

Monday 19 August 2019

life cycle of a monarch butterfly

Did you know butterflies have multiple different types but today we will talk about the monarch butterfly and the life cycles of them that they have?

Firstly they start off in egg this is the egg stage but slowly the egg will start to crack eventually the egg hatches to reveal a slimy  Caterpillar.      

Secondly, the caterpillar is a herbivore (only eats leaves) the caterpillar gets bigger when it eats(and it eats a lot) and finally the caterpillar hangs on a branch.

Then the caterpillar has now entered the pupa stage(third stage)
Also, the pupa is known as a chrysalis and a cocooned butterfly slowly the chrysalis gets more see-through to reveal

Wednesday 14 August 2019

Life cycle of a frog

life cycle of a frog 
Did you know a frog has multiple stages in its life cycle. A life cycle is were animals and humans experience stages in their life and i’m going to tell you them.

First the female frog lays the eggs then the male frog fertilise it but some. Don’t get fertilise when there is rain some eggs get destroyed there's jelly  around the eggs.

A few weeks later the eggs hatch now they are tadpoles which is the second. Stage they pop out of there egg and eat the egg (yolk) in a few days later the. Frog's external gills next the frogs elongated their tail to be continued.

I Matthew have read your writing i like how you used great vocab next time use more punctuation

Thursday 8 August 2019

Climate change

Climate change causes  floods and ice storms now let’s get into it. 

Climate change is when the temperature changes climate change is caused by volcanoes erupting another one is when the earth rotation changes to be closer to the sun the last natural climate change is the changes energy but humans can 
 cause climate change too.

Here is just a few ways we pollute the earth that makes co2 is a gas from cars,planes and factory’s are just a few there are plenty more. They cause hurricanes and tornadoes which are Are stronger and that is climate change.
I matthew have read you writing I like how you used good punctuation to improve I think you should have more ideas and make it make more sense.

Tuesday 6 August 2019

Double features by Karlos and brent

were recycling goes

were recycling goas 

Did you know two hundred and forty thousand tons of waste every year gets produced in Auckland. If we recycle properly we can divert 140,000 tons.

First of all you put your bin on the kerbside then they take it to the MRF they tip them on the conveyor belt which is called a pre sort it’s the most important part they take the non-recyclable product then they are sorted by cardboard and glass and aluminium and plastic and steel and paper they have different conveyor belt one is they heavy things like steel and aluminium
Get’s  compounded into cubes and that is what happens to our recycling.

I like how you used great vocab next time I think you should have more ideas.