My Holiday Writing

My holiday was the best yet and here's why it was so amazing.

First, I moved down the road.. we picked the worst night to move, it was like a hurricane outside, it was a mix between a hurricane and a tornado. 

After we moved, there was no internet forever!!!( five days but it felt like an eternity) for my family and I, on the first day the tv wasn’t working! it was a disaster.

Next, I went with my friend to a new arcade called Arche Brothers first we went to the Bumper Cars and then the Basketball game, I won against my friend (Kayden)next was the claw machine we won nothing. (it was rigged).  

And that my friend was my splendid holiday.

Buddy comment by Zara - I love the way how you used the word 'splendid' in your writing, keep up the good work.