Thursday, 30 May 2019

Basketball

basketball
Oh nooo I don't want a headache not again
“Let's play basketball i'll win”
“sure you will” looks like torture again help.


All I hear is “pass, pass, pass and shot, shot, shot” I taste dirt (does not taste nice)every second and I do not like it also my face smashing into the ground. 


Now you know what it’s like to be a basketball and the torture of it as well so think about it next time you play basketball

I hope you enjoyed my writing and thank you for listening so don't play basketball!!! Please help me I beg you.

I like how you described what the basketball felt, I think you can improve on using more punctuation.   
by Matthew

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