My Holiday Writing

My holiday was the best yet and here's why it was so amazing.

First, I moved down the road.. we picked the worst night to move, it was like a hurricane outside, it was a mix between a hurricane and a tornado. 

After we moved, there was no internet forever!!!( five days but it felt like an eternity) for my family and I, on the first day the tv wasn’t working! it was a disaster.

Next, I went with my friend to a new arcade called Arche Brothers first we went to the Bumper Cars and then the Basketball game, I won against my friend (Kayden)next was the claw machine we won nothing. (it was rigged).  

And that my friend was my splendid holiday.

Buddy comment by Zara - I love the way how you used the word 'splendid' in your writing, keep up the good work. 

Sentence starters

She slightly opened the curtains… She anxiously took a look outside “ahhhh” Amelie screamed Amelie peeked outside. The crane was swinging the house violently swish swish swish! The windows were shattering slowly pieces started to crumble off the building...  

1 min movie by Karlos,Brent,Jason and mustafa

Rekohu timeline By Karlos and Brent

multilink 3 by Karlos and Brent

gymnastics recount

Did you ever do gymnastics as a kid well I've been doing this for weeks because of kiwi sport. And here is what I learned so far it was fun here's are some reasons.

The things I liked were the safety roll but sometimes it hurts but I think it will come in handy in the future. The next thing I liked was the parkour course it was a fun experience for me.

The gymnastics I didn’t enjoy were the partner exercises it was the most challenging exercises there was the second one is

The balancing pole again I got hurt a little bit but it's a good skill to balance.

And that is what we did for gymnastics 

catch of the day by Karlos and Brent